any inputs, thoughts etc etc , cheers guys 
http://soundcloud.com/peter-okeeffe/p-o-k-sloterdijk-192fade
I really like it dude, it’s well structured, sounds work, I think adding a vocal would take it to another level, if you can find the right lady.
thankyou man… still havent chanced my arm with vocals yet… not a big fan of vocals, but would like to try adding maybe a few vocal sweeps here and there!
Thumbs up Peter 
Well structuerd and some great sounds
thankyou slender, much appreciated!