made a new track… feedback would be greatly appreciated… un-sure about the breakdown :). thanks in advance
http://soundcloud.com/peter-okeeffe/p-o-k-no-strings-attached
had a quick listen mate and it sounds pretty tight tbh
so yeah keep it up 
thanks for the reply man… means alot :). anything at all that strikes you thats off with the track man?? people hav been tellin me to bin the break down and start from scratch with it!. what do ye all think?
Had a good listen to this in my headphones annnd …yeah, I like it a lot.
If you want suggestions, I can only really think of a few. Try adding some stereo width to the hats and pads, to give it a slightly fuller sound maybe. regarding the breakdown, it would be nice to kinda automate the filter cutoff on the main riff, in order to give that section some builds and extra energy. I don’t know what you built in on, sounds like akustik piano and vangaurd or nexus? i’m sure whatever you’ve composed this on you can use to widen your sound a bit. Overall though, I have to say I really like it. Thanks for posting!
Holy smokes! Awesome track dude!
Love it!
The breakdown is good though.
Why not add some euphoric vocals to it to really make it stand out?
-E
nice track, for me the best part was the breakdown and the drop back in. the track sounds really good possibly try and make it wider