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New track, nothing fancy nothing im really proud of but i finnished it and just wanted to share and here you guys thoughts!:w00t:
Some really nice elements… good structure and sounds.br
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I think the chords/riff combo is 90% there… still a few tweaks i would make to just tidy it up.br
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The off Beat chord change is a cool idea and can work but i think only really if its more often so you can build a rhythm in your head. its also happening on the “weird” chord which is like 2 weird things happening at once which is a step oto far i think.br
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If it where me id just bring it back in to line same as the other ones.br
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The riff dosnt resolve right for me… feels like its left hanging at the end… think you not some sort of a Cadence that would make it more fulfilling.br
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Cheers Phil, i just listened to it and i was thinking about what you said in your previous post about the cadence thing and that chord thing. First i had the Second chord from bar 2- 3.1 then third cord from 3.1-3.4 and forth chord 3.4 - 5 just changed it just before the mastering stage. br
But i feel like you have a great point with 2 weird things happening at the same place! br
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I have to say that i like the first 3 bars of the melody but not the 4th. i feel i lost it there somewhere. Didn’t manage to get it sounding just right. So i just left it like that, I feel like melodies and chord progression is something i really have to work on. br
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So i might give it a rework when i get some time! and thanx again for feedback 