New Tune (Please Comment)

I made a new tune today, could anybody give me some feedback, i am pretty new to abelton ( 1year) so be nice :slight_smile:



Iam not good with mastering / or mixing, need som practice :slight_smile:







million tanx



JT


Something is wrong with my Kick, its distorting. On my KRK´s it sounds nice. but on the iphone with headset its sounds like **** :slight_smile: got to fix that



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Jt

nice groove to your track, good feel… kick sounds good on my end, but ive got a subwoofer… you could try eqing your kick, id probably start boostin around 80-100hz whatever sounds best on your system, then boost around 500hz again watever sounds good, this should help when playin back on your headset, or jus in general on other systems, you should also look into multiband compression and other mastering techniques to get you that sound you want, everywhere you listen to it. id love some feedback on my track i just posted here, if your up to it…

my bad, didnt see distorting, jus do the opposite i guess lol, lower 80-100hz and maybe 500hz but u might not need to lower 500hz, maybe you could boost that for a nice audible kick without the thump distortion

i don’t like the kick and the mixdown

and you need a bit more of variation.



Remember i’m not saying stuff is bad , it’s actually good but I give you feedback on which you can work on.

I am happy fore any comment :slight_smile: tnx



Jt