New tune, some feedback would be great

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been working on this for maybe a week or so, kind of started jamming on the keyboard and this came out. having a bit of trouble mixing the bass and such, but any feedback would be great :slight_smile: cheers



(it’s a soundcloud link by the way just shortened it)

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haven’t done any mastering on it yet by the way

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i liked the elements, personally i’d filthy up that raspy chord sound with some fuzz and steal an arrangement from something a bit more interesting…

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haha, alright that’s fair :stuck_out_tongue: thanks for the tips mate

4

Nice elements although i’m not feeling the pad over the top i feel it doesn’t fit with the rest of the tune :smiley:

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Sorry Japwow I totally missed your comment earlier! thanks :stuck_out_tongue: might go back and work on this a bit more with the new rhythm tutorial up.