Just Finished this one. I still think it needs some work. Just wondering What other people think. All comments are welcome Thanks.
You bring me Joy - Paul Lock - Funk’d Up DJ by DJlockstar
Awsome tune dude! It did seem like you used the same noise sweep alot but other then that it was great.
Thanks man. From listening back I can see your point with the noise sweeps. So I am going to do some work and use more variation I think. I’m also thinking about loosing the vocal but can’t make up my mind.
Thanks for the feedback
Anyone else with any comments? I would appreciate that very much. Also I am in middle of sending this out to a few record labels but don’t really no how to go about it. Can anyone help please? I have sent to a couple on soundCloud but If anyone has any tips or advise to point me in the right direction that would be helpful.
Thanks
mate, this is one problem with ALOT of producers. you will know when the time is right to send out your stuff. you bassdrum is clashing with some other low frequencies in your mix. your synth i still not big enough, it doesnt have that edge. listen to for example deadmau5 - not exactly. his synth has that edge to the sound, and it sounds powerful. your vocals are sitting right in the centre of the mix, they also have a freq that does not sound good. so forget about record labels for now, perfect your music first.
love it mate - well done
Nice tune mate, really liking it, I’d agree with the above comment on the sweep thing. The tune does great at the start with building the energy, but it seems to dip abit after the main breakdown, not sure if this is on purpose or not. Great tune though, keep up the good work.
Danny
I gave it some plays and left a comment on your player. Best wishes, Paul 