New Vocal Trance Tune

Hi, here is a link to a tune I wrote based on the “How to Make Progressive Trance” tutorial. I wrote lyrics and had my buddy sing them. I think it came out well: br
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Hey mate, sounds cool in my opinion, build up is nice, but…br
The vocals - not something I like in the track ! br
The vocalist needs improvement, and the vocals are too quiet imo for a Vocal
Hope I helped ! :smiley:

Hi, I raised the vocal volume a bit and the synth that plays along at that part (they play off each other). I’ve had the same remark from some others. As far as the vocalist, overall I was quite satisfied, but I do get what you’re saying. Perhaps I’ll try another vocalist for the next tune just to switch things up …

yeah great build up. i like the chords very much. br
the vocals should be a little more present.