updated this, doubt anyone will remember the original effort, one for the proggy heads i guess…
Hahaha. And what was rewritten for practice and fun? We might have a bit of A/B-ing 
You’ve improved your work considerably within a year. When listening to this I get the feeling that some elements are out of key, but that might be my ears tricking me.
haha i think its cos the bass doesnt sit sweetly with everything else, im really lazy when it comes to that side of things and still dont really know what the **** im doing half the time 
updated this again, sounds a bit more subtle now 
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