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hi guys,

the story is, im writing a track for a female vocalist for her to perform at a concert in spain in june. she already has a few tracks and wanted one more to complete her set. did one a couple of weeks ago (grace 1 mix 1) but she tells me she thinks its abit too clubby for the festival, so asked me to write something else abit more pop/summer.

what do you think?

http://soundcloud.com/carnehan

its grace 2 mix 1.

thanks!

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no opinions? not even to tell me its carp? lol   :frowning:

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I commented on soundcloud, good stuff!

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[quote]mussi81 (12/04/2010)[hr]I commented on soundcloud, good stuff![/quote]

thanks dude

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wow, nice track dude… love the bassline :slight_smile:

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[quote]peter o’keeffe (13/04/2010)[hr]wow, nice track dude… love the bassline :)[/quote]thanks for commenting :wink:

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i remember liking the first one! haven’t heard this through yet, but the first minute is nice! excellent work =-)

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[quote]newartist (14/04/2010)[hr]i remember liking the first one! haven’t heard this through yet, but the first minute is nice! excellent work =-)[/quote]thank you :wink: much appreciated!

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Well you certainly caught that summer feel - I really liked it

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[quote]slender (14/04/2010)[hr]Well you certainly caught that summer feel - I really liked it[/quote]thank you vv much;)

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[quote]jpgetty2win (14/04/2010)[hr][quote]newartist (14/04/2010)[hr]i remember liking the first one! haven’t heard this through yet, but the first minute is nice! excellent work =-)[/quote]thank you :wink: much appreciated![/quote]



for sure, jpgetty2win! you’ve probably heard it already, but if not, here’s my latest “project”:

soundcloud.com/afrodisaster/as-sudden-as



the link will probably last for a day or two, at most, though.



peace~


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ye thats sweet man. i like the CP and the vocals tripped me out lol :cool: