hi guys
did this track for a singer called grace, shes going to put some lyrics to the track this week but in the meantime wondered what you think of it? 
http://soundcloud.com/carnehan
top track called grace 1 mix 1.
thanks
sounds nice man 
Nice summertime feel to it. I dig all the sounds you got in there, I just think you could make the track even better. In my humble opinion you could spice it up a bit more with some fx littered throughout. Also automate the hell out of that electric piano (maybe filter cutoff). Sounds a bit stagnant the way it is sitting now. Work on the arrangement a bit. You never really give it long enough to get the listener into the groove. Overall though, good work.
B.
thank for the input guys, much appreciated!!
tried to get it as concise as poss. didnt want it going on forever, shes got a few tracks to sing at the show so couldnt really have this one going on for a 7min club mix.
will take on board what was said about the automation! thank you both again!
EDIT: sorry didnt mention in the first post the girl i wrote it for is doing a gig in spain in june and wanted a new track for her set.
nice relaxed feel, I like it
thank you sean