Original track (trance/progressive)

Thoughts on my track?br
[url]https://soundcloud.com/d-jaims/jaims-ether-original-mix[/url]

Not my kinda genre but i did really enjoy that well done, Mixdowns great (on work headphones just like everyone else using this forum) I genuinely don’t have any advice on this track it does sound pretty legit IMO.br
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Congrats man, you got Skype or anything?

Nice work!, love the progressive build up and second break!br
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The beginning seems to be missing something. To me, it felt like the first part was missing just a small extra sound to differentiate the last 8 bars leading into the big middle section…just my thoughts. maybe Something like the second base part in the future electro house HTM videos.

Thanks for the feedback. And thanks for listening!