Phil - couple of tracks pretty much finished - can you listen and feedback please

Hi Phil, i have pretty much finished the following 2 tracks, can you please listen and advise on anything that might be worth doing in the final tweaks to them, before i send them off to labels:br
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Here’s the first one:br
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And the second one:br
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Thanks mate, David.

Phil, can you have a listen and feedback when you have 5 mins mate.br
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Cheers, David.

Both Tracks sound good.br
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can you link me to stuff you like in the same area… so i can maybe fine tune in on things. The tracks are very sorted so its really more a nuance thing in making them sound more polished… but it really depends on the area you are going for.

Will do.br
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You don’t think the bass in ‘The Pressure’ is messy?br
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A couple of people commented on this forum that they thought the bass was quite far off!br
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I have checked it on a few systems and think it sounds okay! Maybe not perfect or absolutely mind-blowing - but good enough to perhaps get signed?

i don’t know what they’re talking about. the bass sounds great to me. good work and release ready imo.

Thanks Cosmic.br
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Good to hear someone else thinks it sounds okay. Like i said, i’ve checked it on a few systems and thought it was fine - not amazing - but good enough.br
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Phil would still be good to hear from you on this though?