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Still a WIP but here’s my latest offering.br
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Comments welcome :)br
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Cheers
Some nice ideas in here, got a really nice early 90s vibe to it. From a technical perspective my comments would be that things sound a little dry. Also the sounds feel quite separated in parts, I would try compressing the piano quite hard then just easing off the compressor until you get a tight sound, add a touch of reverb to the piano with quite a bit of pre delay, Then also work on the master bus compression to glue it all together. It would certainly benefit from a little more percussion too, although I know this sound is meant to be simple and clean, the ideas are there just needs some polishing for me.
Thanks for the feedback and comments - I’d agree with you that things defintely need to gel more in this version. I’ve been working on improving things over the past couple of days so would be interested on your thoughts when I post an update.br
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Thanks again 
At 0.34 there’s a real high resonance on that vocal that jumps right out. 0.50 again. Possibly thanks to the filter effect as it keeps happening through the track. At loud volumes things like that are even more a problem, it will hurt peoples ears.