Pink elephants

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Good work, has more going on and keeps you interested! br
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Maybe you could bring in the off beat hat/shaker that starts at 59 seconds right from the start of the track use a combination of volume and auto filter to bring it in nice and gradually. That would create more interest at the start of the track too.br
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Just a thought matebr
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Ady

Very atmospheric! I agree about the hats coming in a little earlier to add a little more interest, in fact I might even consider cutting it down in length as 8.34 mins seems a little long. It’s fine if you are using the track to layer under other tracks as part of a mix but on its own, could make listeners lose interest.br
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I really like the groove after the break, but it takes too long to get to it. Yeah it defo gets moving around the 4 min mark, quality Techno! And that’s the kind of stuff you dont mind playing on for x amount of bars as its got plenty of change-ups to keep you interested.br
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These are just my thoughts though dude so up to you if you listen or not, either way its a quality sounding track! ;)br