hi, im only 14 years old, and i want to get some feedback so i can improve my future songs 
Great melodies and atmosphere… your obviously quite a talented musician.
To take it to the next level i think you need to work on more powerful clubby grooves.
a better kick and a few nice loops could make a big difference.
Keep us updated on how your progressing.
Thanks but can youu give me some links… hehe. Please. and i really want to make al little more club music.
I think you should take a look at the basics of what your software (DAW - Ableton/FLstudio/Logic etc) can do, learn about sidechain compression on your bass (youtube) how to use delay, reverbs etc. Get practising on these elements, then you should really start to listen to professional track made by the people you like listening too… see how they use sounds/drums/fx… grab a track you like and load it into your DAW… Then use that as the structure/body for your tune… learn from the pros and in time you will be able to do the same (with plenty of practice/trail error/pain)
keep aiming high man… good job on this one too 