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I would like to have some feedback on this new project im working on right now. Its a proggy track and i just wanted to have some constructive feedback about how you think everything sounds so far. I might change the kick and modify the stabby part near the break wich will become more melodic after the main break. So yeah the track is a work in progress and theres still a lot to do, but i wanted to know if theres some major things i should be looking for as for now :).br
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Rivi.br
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[url]https://soundcloud.com/rivi17/passport[/url]
nice nice. very chill. br
I like the melody and the synth. The kick could be a little stronger. How fast is this track running? br
Bring the bpm a little down to add more calmness 
good job
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The lead is mixed too loud so it takes away from the kick and bass.br
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same with the clap.br
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try mixing the kick and bass really loud and ensure they dominate the track.br
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apart from that you need to post up a full track so i can comment on the arrangement which is so key for dance music.
Thanks guys for the feedback!br
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@clexxxx the BPM is running at 127, I remember I tried 126 or 124 and the difference was huge so I’ll try again when the main break is done to see how everything souds so far. br
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@clexxx and Davidmclean, yeah as for the kick i’m definately going to change it. Maybe not the soft kick when the intro kicks in but the main kick is definately not strong enough. I’ll keep in mind to bring my kick and bass louder also. br
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Thanks again and I’ll post the final result eventually