Rolling off the edge

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i need 2 upload in soundcloud more mixcloud thinks it some other track if you listen 2 the track they say it is you can clearly here its diffrent…:w00t:

Hey buddy,br
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Nice use of percussion and panning but it really would benefit from some variation and some sweeping sounds with a decent breakdown thrown it at some point. It doesn’t seem to build much and for me that’s really important in Techno.br
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This is what I mean. The synth risers and use of white noise are spot on to keep you pining for the next drop, whilst the main riff keeps the breakdowns together.br
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If you change it I’d love to hear it again, just needs a bit of extra work to really finish it off!br
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Stu