Run out of ideas on this house track need help lol

as the title of the thread says ive run out of ideas so if anyone ccould have a listen and give me some feedback i’d e really grateful its not the usaul sort of thing i aim to produce but it sounded ok so i went with it:D



thanks in advance;)



untitled by chriswalker

maybe make a melody, then have it go somewhere

It could almost be complete like that I reckon. Another layer or another set of heavier drum patterns and some clever structure and call it done :slight_smile:

I’d add some sort of a melody mate , u got a nice rythm

u got the vocals , add a melody and consider it done :slight_smile:

I dont actually agree with P-Shot or Steve, I think the track already has a lot going for it and doesnt need a melody (if one is applied, maybe something subtle and light on the ears to accompany the bass?).

Samuel hit the spot, more work on the percs flow and some more fx maybe?

The track sounds like a full one already, doesnt need too much added IMO.

Nice work so far, good luck with it!

[quote]MistroPain (11/12/2011)[hr]I dont actually agree with P-Shot or Steve, I think the track already has a lot going for it and doesnt need a melody (if one is applied, maybe something subtle and light on the ears to accompany the bass?).
Samuel hit the spot, more work on the percs flow and some more fx maybe?
The track sounds like a full one already, doesnt need too much added IMO.
Nice work so far, good luck with it![/quote]

Yeah, I agree with this - I am not sure a melody would really fit the style. I might try out some tech-house stabs though.

thanks for all the advice itried the melody thing and i could not get it to work even subtly but thats my lack of skills tbh

i’m gonna go down the percussion route instead and try make it a bit more techy and hopefully post it up next weekend;)



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