Sample of Inter Ratet 2010 rmx

This is a work in progress of a remix i am doing of an old ‘makina’ track called Inter Ratet. Could people please comment on this sample, good or bad, i am just looking for feedback to help me improve, thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/seb-otigbah/seb-o-inter-ratet-2010-rmx-sample

can people see the player? all i can see is the embed code??

all i see is code, change the link to html

done, and now its working. thanks

I quite like this, very melodic, i think the bass cuz its a quite high sound, needs a bit more weight, did you add any sub?,  the build up melody reminded me of pitchin. 

Good effort

Paul

Thanks mate, I havnt added a sub as such, i done alot of work on the synth i used to create the bass and thought it was too fat at one stage so i left it lol. Now that you’v brought it up tho, it is high for a bass line… i will add a sub and see what the results are. I agree with you actually, so cheers for bringing that up. Thanks again for the comment

by the way, wots pitchin?

check it out hi gate - pitchin :smiley:

lol, cant believe i never knew the name of this tune, its a classic!

the songs not working for me

strange, does the link take you anywhere? when i click it, it takes me to soundcloud, i’m new so i dont know exactly what im doing.