Hey guys - just thought i’d post up the latest thing I am working on! :
http://soundcloud.com/bobbylickrish/lickrish-music-ft-gemma-jay-so-cold-work-in-progress
very very nice song 
Nice track mate, really works for me, interesting throughout, plenty of urgency, the vocal sits well too, although at one point it sounded as if it were distorting. I especially like that sub in the build up, really adds energy, is it side chained or automated in any way? All in all great track keep up the excellent work.
Thanks for the comments guys.
Most of the feedback so far has touched on the distortion of the vox. I deliberately distorted it to try and give it a gritty feel - but think I will go back to the drawing board and tone it down . . . maybe a cleaner sound for the vocal would be best after all! 
As for the sub bass - this is just a straight sine wave from operator - no side chaining but just a touch of compression.
Thanks again for your posts chaps.