Hi, woul love some feedback on my first track completed using ableton live,
found the sonic academy lessons super in helping me finish this track, heres link to my profile
http://www.sonicacademy.com/site/Member-MyAccount.aspx?memberid=4015
sorry heres the link, made a mistake first time, all feedback appreciated
thats pretty nice man,
im by no means an expert but you should try using some delay/reverb on the vocals, they seem to be a bit harsh, nice minimal melodies though, could also try and add a few variations on the drum pattern with some reverse cymbals on the end of bars.
good first track though 
appreciate you’re thoughts man 
Sounds great… especially when the bongo loop comes in!
maybe just want to bring your kick up a bit in the mix…
Liking this mate, can’t believe this is your first track!
Vocal sounded a bit over powering and harsh, might wanna work on that a bit as well as the all round levels, felt like the highs seemed a little too high.
Brilliant first track though, im really impressed.
Thanks people for the thoughts, find it very encouraging
mate if this is your first track…i believe we should expect great stuff from you soon…
keep it up…