Some ideas after 5 months abroad... (an attempt to do trance)

Been without my computer for 5 long months, so managed to forget almost everything I learned before I went away.



Couldn’t get these chords and melodies out of my head so had to put them into a song, so gave them space here. What do I need to do to improve it?!



(For the moment I only have crappy headphones so can’t hear the bass frequencies properly)



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