Something that I think needs to be finished

Music Production Track Feedback
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You like it? Any tips/things I need to work on?

Thanks in advance!
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Sounds great!! actually no tips for this, would like to hear the whole song!!

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Thanks! Am busy finishing this, but this will be more or less (think more fx and fills) the main break :wink:

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Enjoyed this one dude, very nice.

The only thing I can see is that the vocals have a sort of weird double up just before it loops, looks like it was intentional but I dont personally like it.

Secondly the fx’ish thingy that hit just before each piano note I would personally add more reverb to and maybe make it slightly more steamy sounding (add some more white noise just behind it maybe?).

There just personal things I would do, might not be your thing.

Cant wait to hear the full version.

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Sounds really nice, so i think the only thing now that is going to make or break this is the arrangement!



Therefore post up a first version of the finished track with the arrangement done, and then i can really give you some good feedback on it!



Sounds really good so far though.

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[quote]MistroPain (29/12/2012)[hr]Enjoyed this one dude, very nice.

The only thing I can see is that the vocals have a sort of weird double up just before it loops, looks like it was intentional but I dont personally like it.

Secondly the fx’ish thingy that hit just before each piano note I would personally add more reverb to and maybe make it slightly more steamy sounding (add some more white noise just behind it maybe?).

There just personal things I would do, might not be your thing.

Cant wait to hear the full version.[/quote]



I’d second that opinion. The rough noise hit before the piano stab works rhythmically but I found the freqs a bit too harsh. I’d swap it out for another stab or reverb it or something. Maybe a wooden perc hit, with a lot of reverb and a slight delay?



Got a nice vibe to the sample overall though Daniel.

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Thanks all for the feedback. Just noticed this.

Track is more or less finished, but will have another look at the fx (hit on wood) you dislike. Maybe there’s something I can do about the harshness.