Just finished up the nu disco tutorial and this is what came out of it! great training vid series!
http://soundcloud.com/williwasmusic/summer-breeze-original
First of all, you could have posted the track in your message:
But this is quite a good track. There's nothing wrong with it.
That panned bassline is cool.
The only thing that pops up is that it hasn't got a break. And I'm a sucker for breaks :D