Hello everyone! I have recently made a ‘Deep Techy’ House track. I would like to hear what you guys think about it, and if I can improve some of the things in it.
https://soundcloud.com/karismaemusic/break-my-fall-wip/s-vKmef
Check it out! 
Totally love the vibe of this track, you need to get some separation into your bottom end, I would like to hear a little definition on the very low plucky bass. Sounds to me like the subby bass is to low (try octave up on the second chord) and starting the bloop out - and I think there is a low drone in there causing mud. Your bend strings and analogue riff are great, bit off low in the breakdown riff that could be removed. Loving that Davi style bass riff. A really short crisp closed might help - But great vibe @JacobBerry , love it
Also loving the atmosphere in this… only thing i though it was missing a bit of groove.
Maybe something like this would help progress it nicely.
Heres the loop on its own… just some Toms from Ultimate Drums 2
just to confuse matters - i wouldn’t touch a thing 
you no likey the bongos mate!
He’s never off his bongos ffs
Thanks for all the great tips and feed!
I’ve tweaked a bit on the basses and low ends, so it hopefully sounds less crowded. I didn’t change any notes though, since it would sound cheesy.
- And for the bongos: I tried it out, but I didn’t feel like it worked well. And since ‘Less is more’, no bongos for this one
I’ve uploaded the Fix for you all to hear it:
https://soundcloud.com/karismaemusic/break-my-fall-wip-fix/s-NsCt9
Sounds great… I think you where right to leave out the bongos… would probably have detracted a bit from the moody atmos… defo a top track this… should have no bother getting it signed.