Tech Trance, first attempt

Music Production Track Feedback
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Hey everyone!



I’m quite new to Sonic academy and thought I’d upload a track I have sort of finished :Whistling:. Its my first real attempt at Trance, and any pointers or suggestions are very much welcome. Thanks



http://soundcloud.com/ben-lloyd/wind-chill

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not bad for a 1st tune mate, better then my first stuff! keep it up :slight_smile:

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Cheers mate appreciate it! any suggestions on how I can improve? What areas should I work on?

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not bad mate as thingy said.



I’d say your song needs another wee synth line from about 2 minutes onwards.



Also, after your long break, it doesn’t kick in good enough, it should be right in your face at that point. That’s what the whole song leads up to so really it should be the best bit.



Cheers

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Thanks for the feedback and taking the time to listen. Ill take note :slight_smile:

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[quote]Ben Lloyd (30/07/2010)[hr]Hey everyone!



I’m quite new to Sonic academy and thought I’d upload a track I have sort of finished :Whistling:. Its my first real attempt at Trance, and any pointers or suggestions are very much welcome. Thanks



http://soundcloud.com/ben-lloyd/wind-chill[/quote]



i think try bringing the volume of the synth sound up, or eq it up further in the mix.



if the frequencies aren’t there, then maybe bring another synth sound in to sit in the middle frequencies, where it sounds a little empty.