I like the track as well but ( that's a personal taste choice I believe ) I won't be using such a Hard Techno kick in such track. I think the track has got many melodic elements that create a kind of controversial listening experience with this very hard kick. Again, this is purely personal taste & liking I guess, but have you heard some Hannes Bieger tracks ?? There's some nice elements in your track that could fit the genre and that's where the kick is not working for me, if you have a listen to some of his tracks you probably get what I mean
For the 2nd drop, it works fine at the start but from 4:30 you could bring less elements ( you could use the part from 2:00 ) to smooth the transition toward the end of the track, you didn't lost the main idea in that drop but it's too long & busy with full elements and makes the end less cohesive with the all mix IMO.
Nice work overall