A little remix I’ve done have a listen and enjoy 
Not really my style of music, don’t really like it sorry. Sounds like too much going on .
Have to agree with the post above - it’s just like there are some sounds competing for your attention so you don’t really know on what you should concentrate. And it surely isn’t a song that you jut play in the background.br
Apart from that I think you did a good job on the technical side, everything sounds neat and clean