hey again,
thanks for the advice you guys give, it’s so very helpful and I always think about what’s been said when making something. so please, what needs done to this. it’s missing something.
Piss in a pot by SaulMan
cheers
Good pads! I liked the track once all the parts kicked in at about 2:00 but intro didn’t work for me. The synth stabs/lead sound seem a little harsh on their own at the start. Personally I’d filter them and reduce the repetition of notes. Open the filter and add notes gradually to build the tension here. Just an idea. Hope it helps.
[quote]jonsloan (08/08/2010)[hr]Good pads! I liked the track once all the parts kicked in at about 2:00 but intro didn’t work for me. The synth stabs/lead sound seem a little harsh on their own at the start. Personally I’d filter them and reduce the repetition of notes. Open the filter and add notes gradually to build the tension here. Just an idea. Hope it helps.[/quote]
Cheers man, I agree. Was thinking along those exact lines, the intro is too quick into the song, it should ease up.
Aye the main bit sounds half decent, but the intro is balls lol.
Oh yeah also, I was wondering if there’s too much repetition? Like does it just seem as if the same notes are playing over and over?
another interesting track, keep it up mate 
[quote]ekko (09/08/2010)[hr]another interesting track, keep it up mate :)[/quote]
thanks man. means a lot.