Thoughts on this track please?

Hi everyone, please give me your thoughts on this track:br
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David.

Hi David, really liking the sounds you’ve got goin on here, great groove. I’d love to play it in one of my mixes, its got that get up and move your feet feel to it!br
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My one criticism would be to maybe dial back the time it takes for that sound to pan left and right as I found myself zoning out of the rest of the track because of it… :hehe:

Like that, have you run it through a limiter to master it?

[quote]en1gma (12/01/2014)[hr]Hi David, really liking the sounds you’ve got goin on here, great groove. I’d love to play it in one of my mixes, its got that get up and move your feet feel to it!br
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My one criticism would be to maybe dial back the time it takes for that sound to pan left and right as I found myself zoning out of the rest of the track because of it… :hehe:[/quote]br
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Thanks for the feedback mate.br
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Are you listening on headphones? I’m guessing yes as this would make the panning more prominent?

[quote]keithrobinson (12/01/2014)[hr]Like that, have you run it through a limiter to master it?[/quote]br
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Yes it has some mastering on the end.br
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Did you not find it loud enough?

Hi David yes it was on headphones mate. I just found myself listening out for it and couldnt tell my ears to stop doin it! lol

Yes it i panned hard left and right! Maybe too much?

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It’s a really good track. Well arranged.br
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I can see what en1gma is talking about. For me that noise perhaps could do with being an octave lower. It does stick out in the mix a lot.br
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Also, and this is just a personal preference, I have real trouble with vocal stabs, I don’t know why but I find them really distracting. So, I was overly listening out for that too. But, like I said, it’s just a personal thing.

Thanks Jon.