Hey,
Iam working on this one , it’s a snippet of 2 minutes to give an impression,
But iam a bit stuck in what to add more;)
I really could use some feedback in what i do wrong or good 
I would suggest going through the dutch house course step by step first then going in and changing some of the parts.
This will give you a good structure to work from and explain a lot about what bits should come when etc.
once you have done that post your results and i will be able to give more useful feedback.
Watched some tut’s Phill,
This is what i came up with :
Can you give me more specific feedback now?:D
Sounds like you have various elements in different keys. so things sound a bit out of tune with each other. try to keep bass lines etc centered around the same note and build from there.
The riff seems to be jumping around a lot… try watching some of the main room house chords videos at the start of the course
Keep posting your improvements and ill try to help further.