Tune Idea

Hey all,



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Here’s a link to the start of my new breaks track. I’ve got shoddy speakers so I’m finding it hard to level at the moment so any pointers as to where the levels are off would be much appreciated.



So what I want to know is do the vocals sound to messed up towards the middle of the track. I’ve layered the chopped up vocal loop over a timestretched version and I’m thinking they might just be too busy for the track.



Opinions anyone, be as brutal as you like, I’m still learning so I know it’s no club anthem :slight_smile: