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[hr] Vegrandis - Chris Page - (Nomad Spectrum Remix) Soundcloud Edition by Nomad Spectrum
enjoyed that track dude but im wondering when youre going to do add some groovie little hooky arp or something to your tracks 
I don’t think its an arp the track needs, more like a detroity kinda stab for me. Something in the mid range to keep it interesting, something that takes you by surprise.
I understand what you’re trying to do here slender, you’re trying to create an atmospherical dark track. I don’t get why you have a break so late though, you have a good opportunity to really bring out those weird ambient noises. The sound at like 7.30 should be brought in earlier too, in fact… the last minute is a new song entirely. I like how it’s pretty solid though but I think there needs to be some sort of element that changes as the song progresses.
Nice production dude, agree with saulable though the breakdown comes very late, needs to come in a bit earlier or maybe a second smaller breakdown earlier down the line?
Your music always reminds me of Half-Life 2. My favorite game series. If I were to ever make a film I’d love your music on it. So dark and brooding but at the same time it keeps a certain movement. You should look into film music production for real man. Great stuff. You inspired that dark track I made a couple months back. So thanks for the inspiration!
Ok well thanks for listening
All my tracks tell some sort of story - not that any one else may get that story - the title made me think of snake venom and what it would be like to be slowly poisoned hence the very long main part
I tried some stabs but felt it did not fit
Anyway thanks for the critism always welcome
Oh thanks tankmetal glad I helped inspire darkness
Great textures again. I too think the at the second half is more interesting but the whole track played through pretty quickly in my perception so it didn’t drag anywhere.
the kinda stabby thing at the end i would have liked to hear more of was one of my thoughts…
Needs more Hank Marvin if you ask me 