Hey!
So I must have worked on this track for 4 months. Really spent a lot of time learning how to mix and master. Please let me know what you think!
Hey - nice track
First thing i would maybe look at is the mix. The drum /synth section seems to come in very loud in comparison to your vocal part. Perhaps also your synth part is a little a bit loud in comparison to your drums.
During the intro, I might want to hear some more background elements, like pads/evolving sounds, and some low end.
Also maybe you could add echos to the vocals that repeat 1/4 or 1/8 or something.
I think the drop could have an element that hits harder, like a solid compressed piano. To me it sounds like it is a little flat and missing a brick wall of sound.