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Hi,

Can you tell me what you think of this track:

http://soundcloud.com/david-mclean/david-mclean-bareback

Thanks,

David.

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Awesome track man I really liked it. The arrangement is very good and everything flows nicely its got lots of energy and a catchy main riff and all the different sounds work well together and complement each other.Also the way u go in and out of your breaks is awesome it be great if u could give me some tips on doing those effects. In my personal opinion it is nearly there. But for me your bottom end does’t sound right maybe its being pushed to hard? and in parts the kick gets lost in the mix because it was coming thru nicely in the intro. At 3mins 40 when u bring your bass back in right at the begining it doesn’t sound right when it first drops, also I personally didnt like the bass dropping in there although I do understand what your going for.

Keep up the good work.