What do you think?

Hi all,

I’m working on a new Electro House type piece and I’m pretty ambivalent about its quality. I feel like it’s really not “there”, but I need an outside source to help me.

Much appreciated.

P.S. New to this forum, hi all! From SF, go by Flaxo.

In/in/iN by flaxo-music

hey dude,



You have the outline body for this track but the flow is linear… straight forward I mean. Bass sound would be better suited with some variation, for an example something like Wolfgang Gartner or Miles Dyson… Spread out some additional notes using another Bass sound maybe to keep things interesting? This isn’t really my style of music so I can’t really break it down…



Hope this helps



-=D

etl was right.



I’d suggest trying to layer your bass with an additional sound and then try to vary bars.



It sounds like your bass is a 2 bar loop. If this is the case, I’d try to vary it every other bar. Even just simply going from low to high or high to low would improve some groove.



Also try to mix it up every 8 bars, this way its not the same bass for the whole song.



Bass is prety much the most important part of the electro track IMO.



other then that its a pretty good track. might want to add some more effects like bit crusher to some of your leads in certain parts to give it even MORE variation.