Hey, I did a track which is a little bit slower than usual.
I did it with Ableton.
So without any further words: Feel free to comment on that one.
Winter Wonderland by Chris Racha
I feel your break down at 3:30ish is good and give you some time to breathe, but i would build a little bit to your drop right after that section.
Somehow I miss there a hook, or some sounds, stabs you can grab. Eveything is working in the backgrond, so you dont get something what is really talking to you.something what is pulling you to the next bar, break etc. Ok, even if you want it smooth you need some “dryer” sounds that are more in the foreground and give your mind a litle but nice story.
i listen it again, so some bleeps, plucks in the rigth groove, not to much of them! would give the hole thing, what sounds actaully very cool, a special drive without distroing the atmosphere.