WIP Track inspired by Vince Watson Tutorial

Hi,br
Draft of a track i’m working on ,inspired by following the great Vince Watson tutorial.br
I am only just starting out on music production and my studio is very limited at the moment.I used Ableton and ANA for this.br
Any feedback is welcome.br
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https://soundcloud.com/pmac2012/deep-tech-housebr
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Cheersbr
Paul

Really love those chords! Kick seems kind of boomy. Also just a visual observation. It seems most EDM tracks I look at in Soundcloud have a more “curvy” shape as they transition between sections. Not sure if this is programming elements or mix. Yours shows as very stepped between the sections. Not a criticism at all, just an observation. Kudos to you for doing this project. As a fellow SA student I plan on doing the same thing once I finish Bryan’s Ableton Live 9 courses. Now that I have a decent handle on ANA I’m really excited about putting some stuff up on Soundcloud. Keep it coming!

Cheers J Grant,br
This is only a rough draft at the moment, i wanted feedback on how the arrangement and overall structure works. I see what you mean by the visual with the steps.Hopefully Phil or Chris can chip in with advice on how to polish the track off.br
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Cheersbr
Paul