Some great stuff there… nice ideas and fresh sounding.
things you might want to work on…
The tonal quality of each sound… you could try to EQ them more drastically in to tighter bandwidths so they sit apart better.
eg. you could high-pass filter a few of the sounds to make things less muddy.
the drums could be tighter sounding… and brighter.
have a listen to Butterfly Caught and Future Proof off Massive attack 100th window for ideas about how the drums are EQed and the type of sounds they use.
Keep us updated on how your getting on.
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