Yuri -In the town that I grew up in

Hello again people of sonicacademy. Spent a good month working on this new track and I’d like you to have a listen. Please critique if you can think of any improvements. And thanks again for being such an awesome community :slight_smile: <EMBED height=81 type=application/x-shockwave-flash width=“100%” src=http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F12933562 allowscriptaccess=“always”> Yuri - In the town that I grew up in by Yuri-music

interesting track, could do with a phat kick driving it along i think

Thanks ekko for the feedback. Am definately going to go back in and add a good kick now, don’t know why I didn’t think of this myself :slight_smile:

Okay replaced the old track with the updated one so the link up the top will play the new version. I also removed that fade out. Don’t know why I thought it would sound good? I now know why fade outs are long dead.

mate I think you should make this into a breakbeat track, get the bass muchos fatter with a weighted kick and snappy attacky snare… this would give the tune plenty more drive/pace and energy…

I like my progressive tracks, I’d change the trancy gated synth towards the end for something a little more subtle, like from a prdyz track and you’ll be on the money :slight_smile:

of course you may not even want to go for this sound, it’s just what I’d like to hear!